Feedback and Revisions

Before out final submission we plan to make a few revisions to improve out film. The beginning of our film is mostly short takes so we want to re-shoot these scenes with longer takes to slow the pace of the film. We also want to make the stalker more present throughout the film so its easy for the audience to follow. Additionally, we will be adding suspenseful incidental music as the stalker closes in on the girl. As we are re-shooting the beginning mall scene , i think we need to make it more natural to focus in on the stalker following the group of girls around the mall. By adding more scenes with the hooded stalker, the audience will better understand the plot and foreshadowing of the film. Lastly, we also will change the font size so it flows better with the new edits.

All these changes will help to improve the film because they all add to the horror and mystery genre. By adding scenes of the stalker, it makes it easier for the audience to follow along and will keep them on the edge of their seats. The addition of incidental music creates an eerie mood and is used in many horror and mystery movies to create suspense and foreshadow whats going to come. These changes will keep the audience engaged and leave them wanting more.

We will carry out these changes by re-shooting the beginning scene early so we have enough time for edits and sound to be added. We also have to make sure we are wearing the same clothes so it looks like just one day and doesn't confuse the audience. Lastly we will continue to use Adobe Premiere Pro and become more experienced with it.